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Pressure on the school and university students is increasing and students are pushed to work hard when they are young.What are the positive and negative sides of it?

#pressure #school #university #students #work
University
 has become much of a stressful environment
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 puts
students
 in an always-active condition in order to withstand all the unbearable pressures. In my point of view, I believe
this
 tendency brings both positives and negatives. On the
postive
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positive
 side, I would agree that
this
 tendency Brings a wide range of benefits.
First
 of all,
students
 might study a variety of knowledge with all fields in their life.
As a result
,they might have experience and
opportunites
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opportunities
 to seek
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a
well paid
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 job with the ideal foundation that they had studied at
university
.
Furthermore
,when they work hard in
early
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 years,they can directly address problems arising in real life and might learn how to control themselves
such
 as time management,financial management and many more. On the negative side,pressure on the school and
university
students
 for working hard is the cause of inefficient learning.with a great amount of knowledge acquired on the regular
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,
students
 are more likely to be tired and bored.
secondly
,
university
students
 are easily stressed if they cannot strike a balance between work and leisure.
Therefore
,their enthusiasm for learning will be reduced,resulting in
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poor academic performance. In conclusion,despite the fact that pressuring
students
 may help them to be more ambitious,parents and teachers need to do proper counselling and guide them properly.
Also
,
aptitude
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 of the student
need
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 to be given consideration.
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