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Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Without a doubt, adolescents should be taught how to be a responsible part of
society
. Many people argue who can easily teach them that –
parents
 or teachers. I believe that it is
parents
’ role to introduce these characteristics to young people as early as possible. In
this
 essay, I will examine both notions and state my own.
Firstly
, children usually join
school
 when they are around six years old. By that
time
 their opinions and outlook on life
has
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 already started forming and they discover who they are and what is good much earlier than that age.
Moreover
, kids usually ask a lot of questions, as they are very interested in what surrounds them and how
society
 works.
Furthermore
,
parents
 will be the
first
 people that patiently explain and teach
them
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basics
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 of social life. What is more, often as teenagers grow up they are less eager to learn new things and sometimes it might be too late. If they do not have a good environment that they grow up in, they will be highly influenced by their friends and might think that these are the morals they should refer to in life. Later, when
parents
 try to change that they may realize it is too late as the child has
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 opinion on some aspects already.
On the contrary
, some
parents
 are not the best teachers and they think
school
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the school
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 would teach children how to be good members of
society
 better.
In addition
 in some
families
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parents
 are rarely home and they do not have enough
time
 to show their kids everything they would want to.
Then
school
 is a perfect place for that as there are little ones from different families and they learn how to respect and love one another. All in all, children can be taught how to act in
society
 either at home or in
school
. In my opinion, the best
time
 to do it is as early as possible by
parents
, because
that is
 the
time
 when the young ones are the most eager to learn.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • good members of society
  • teach
  • parents
  • schools
  • responsibility
  • values
  • respect
  • empathy
  • responsibility
  • formal education
  • citizenship
  • ethics
  • social responsibility
  • lead by example
  • role models
  • conducive environment
  • extracurricular activities
  • community involvement
  • collaborate
  • holistic approach
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