In many countries schools have severe problems with student behaviour. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?
Nowadays, misbehaving undergraduates in many institutions
has
caused a severe problem Correct subject-verb agreement
have
to
many nations. I have a firm belief that Change preposition
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as a result
of adolescents not taking studies seriously. Linking Words
However
, the enforcement of strict Linking Words
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rules and regulations by the Change noun form
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authority
may curb Fix the agreement mistake
authorities
this
menace.
In recent times, nations around the world Linking Words
are facing
the dissatisfied behaviour of their pupils towards the hall. Wrong verb form
have been faced with
In other words
, there's a lack of seriousness in students when it comes to curriculum. Linking Words
Moreover
, youngsters and exuberances are more indulging in parties and clubs, or games rather than getting good Linking Words
grades
and passing through their seminary subject. Use synonyms
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last
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grades
caused by a lack of consequential Use synonyms
in
studying.
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nonetheless
, to resolve Linking Words
this
, enhancing faculty's Linking Words
strictness
regulations and rules, more severe penalties could result in sentencing. Replace the word
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Furthermore
, schools should care about their own student's thoughts ,feelings and problems rather than what Linking Words
grades
are they getting. Use synonyms
For example
, the academy's Linking Words
suicidal
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suicide
due to
a lot of pressure that schools are pushing on pupils. Linking Words
In addition
, schools should not only pay attention to their own Linking Words
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students'
grades
but Use synonyms
also
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thought
and feelings or empathy Correct subject-verb agreement
thoughts
to
what they are Change preposition
for
tolerancing
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tolerating
through
.
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apply
To conclude
, I think authorities should give their student a healthy environment and good rules with meaningful regulations and penalties that meet their requirement. Linking Words
Hence
, Linking Words
this
way suicidal, failure and low score graduates may be solved through mental health and physical health.Linking Words
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