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Today family members eat fewer meals together. Why is this? Is this a positive or negative trend?

#members #meals #trend
It has been repeatedly observed that in
this
 current phase several family persons around the world consume hardly any meals with each other at the same
time
. There could be multiple
reason
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 for
such
occurence
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occurrence
occurrences
;
however
 in my perception
this
a
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detriment rather than
benefit
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 to a large extent. My preference is elaborated in
ensuing
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 write up. Examining the root causes the foremost one is
hectic
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a hectic
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 schedule of the people at work. Nowadays there
are
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 more competition in business or even for jobs that person tend to
be work
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 more than others for their achievement of aims.
The another
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 reason would be
distance
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the distance
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 between
workplace
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the workplace
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 and home.
For
instance
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 both parents are working in
different
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a different
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part
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 of the country and their children are studying at hometown so that they have no
time
 to eat food
togather
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together
 at the one movement in a day. Considering the letter question as I mentioned it is a negative impact on
family
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the family
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.
To begin
with
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 children need attention and guidance from their elders
therefore
 dinner is a perfect opportunity to build children
self confidence
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 by listening to them.
Moreover
 eating
togather
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together
 can enhance builds closer relationship within
family
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the family
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. Spending
time
 with each other over dinner will definitely keep in touch with each person on a regular basis despite they have different lives. Adding more
individual
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 have been alone without companionship which can lead to mental health
disorder
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. To conclude it can be stated that family members eat fewer meals
togather
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together
 due to the lack of
time
 and
this
 will affect to the bonding among members. In my own
words
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 every family in the society should eat one
time
 jointly for better health as well as relationship.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • communication
  • bonding
  • interaction
  • quality time
  • technology-free
  • busy schedules
  • work commitments
  • nurturing relationships
  • sharing experiences
  • community spirit
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