You are looking for a part-time job. Write a letter to an employment agency. In your letter: introduce yourself explain what sort of job you would like say what experience and skills you have

Dear sir, I am writing

this

letter to bring to your notice I need a part-time

job

and I was applied to many branches but they do not reply me. My name is XYX and I am living in The north street 36 and recently I moved to

this

area .I completed my hotel management degree

last

year which includes 6-month of experience because my college after degree doing 6-month of tasks related to study. I am new to

this

city and want performance and Me

also

send resume to many fields but anyone does not reply me but I more prefer to the cooking

job

Last

Sunday I was sawing a newspaper and your office give notice about the

job

so I need

this

task because I have some experience of these skills because I have a six-month experience same

Job

. I hope your notice my letter and reply to me soon and give me any information about it so please call me on my 234577 nu number. Your, Truly

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

170 words

7.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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You are looking for a part-time job. Write a letter to an employment agency. In your letter: introduce yourself explain what sort of job you would like say what experience and skills you have

The Closing

Some people think that the media (newspapers ) have the right to publish details of people's private lives, while other think it should be controlled. discuss both views.

In many countries around the world, rural people are oving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Foreign visitors should pay more than local visitors for cultural and historical attractions. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Completing university education is the thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important. Discuss both the sides and give your opinion.

Some people think that human needs for farmland, housing, and industry are more important than saving land for endangered animals. Do you agree or disagree with this point of view?