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Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features , and make comparisons where relevant.

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The diagram illustrates a 2008 data report about the usage of power from 6 sources of fuel. It
also
 gives future usage estimations from the year 1980 to 2030. Overall, Petrol and
oil
, coal and natural gases are the most used sources of energy ,whereas, nuclear, solar/ wind and hydropower are the least used.In the future, the trend is expected to continue. Since the start of the period in 1980, petrol and
oil
 were consumed largely with 35 quadrillion
units
 and the same dynamic is expected
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rise up to approximately 45 in 2030. The consumption
natural
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of natural
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 gas meanders between 20 and 15
units
 up to the year 2015 and from there remains flat up to the end of time,
this
 means its usage is
percieved
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perceived
 to remain constant. The use of coal starts just above 15 quadrillion
units
 below the natural
oil
 but overtakes it
beween
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between
 1990 and 2000. For the
next
 years, the
units
 used in coal float above and below natural
oil
 and in the end it is
percieved
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perceived
believed
 to be used more than natural
oil
.
Moreover
, nuclear, solar/wind and hydropower started at below 5 quadrillion
units
 . Nuclear remained above the other two and it will be so even in 2030.
On the other hand
, solar/wind energy use was lower than
the
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hydropower but in 2000 it overtook the latter and is estimated to remain that way in the future.

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