In many countries, more and more people choose to buy imported food rather than food produced locally. Why people buy imported food? What could be done to encourage people to buy local food?

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There are controversial notions heating up a debate over

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buying

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. Currently, one fact that there are more

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deciding to buy foreign

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than the number choosing native

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, “ the big picture” has always been a topic of interest. It is argued that why

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buy overseas

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instead

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of using local

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. While

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thinking is valid to a certain extent, I believe that they need to formulate a solution to boost the number of

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using local

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. Without a shadow of a doubt, there are some evident reasons why

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prefer imported

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, especially the

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of the

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. Foreign

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have to undergo a strict checking process before getting

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the domestic market which

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them guarantee many safety standards.

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, in European countries, an overseas

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needs to pass the

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tests of every member country which means if the

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is denied by a country, it can not get into

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market.

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, it is understandable why many

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believe in the

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of imported

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. While the redeeming features of foreign

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are widely acknowledged, it is unfair if those of native

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are ignored which means they need to take actions to promote them.

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many local foods have the same

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as imported

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with more affordable prices,

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usually suspect it because they do not know the process of making and packaging those

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, the

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creator can record the way they make the

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and show it on the screen in the shops as well as run some advertisements about it to enhance the image of local

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Winmart

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put a TV in the

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of every market to turn on the video about their checking process which attracts more and more

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to use their

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and make them become one of the biggest supermarkets in Vietnam.

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, I reckon

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companies need to show consumers clear evidence to improve their belief in native

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. In conclusion, despite some apparent reasons why

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prefer imported

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, local

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companies need to show users better points to choose their

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by promoting campaigns to protect local foods.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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In many countries, more and more people choose to buy imported food rather than food produced locally. Why people buy imported food? What could be done to encourage people to buy local food?

Include an introduction and conclusion

10.Some people think that language school be taught in small classes, while other people think the number of students in a language class does not matter. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Whether or not someone achieves their aims is mostly by a question of luck. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

With growing populations in cities, more and more people live in homes with little or no outdoor space. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Full- time students should not spend a lot of time on studying, but the should be involved in other activities too. To what extend do you agree or disagree?