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The growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on the health care system. Some people think that the best way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical education lessons in the school curriculum. To what extent do you agree ?

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Due to its huge impact on quality of life,
overweight
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 has
becoming
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 a major public health concern lately that could lead to lifelong
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 like diabetes. Some people argue that the best way to prevent
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 chronic illness is by actively doing exercise
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young
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 age through
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sport
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 lessons as a part of
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school
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 curriculum. I personally agree if
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 scheme is applied, as it will build
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's character as well as encourage pupils to love
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sport
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 from childhood.
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 and foremost, getting involved in sports activities at
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 will develop
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’s character because some sports,
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 as football and baseball, require great teamwork to win. Teamwork itself can teach pupils to work with fellow humans with different personalities, which I believe will benefit them to expand their networking in professional life later.
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,
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 activities
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 promote the sense of competition that makes
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 realize their potential and strive for it.
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, having physical education as a part of
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school
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 syllabus will encourage
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 to love
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sport
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the sport
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 from childhood and make it a part of
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their lifestyle
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 later as adults. I recall the moment when I was in elementary
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 and had swimming as one of the mandatory subjects at
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. Through the lesson, now I put swimming as my regular exercise and do it twice a month to maintain my weight.
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,
children
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 who are doing sports activities regularly will less likely to suffer from
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in
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which
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 will avoid them from chronic disease caused by weight gain. To conclude, I support the
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’s idea to make
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sport
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the sport
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as
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one of their subjects because it delivers positive effects on pupil's character and forms sustainable behaviour in adulthood.
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 is as long as
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 are given a balanced proportion between physical and science lessons at
school
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.
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