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Tourism is an ever growing industry. What benefits do you think tourism brings to individuals and society?

#tourism #industry #individuals #society
More and more people are travelling these days, and they are not wrong to do so.
Reason
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 being is that travelling is
such
 a fun activity and has a
lot
 of positive impacts. In
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about
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the benefits of touristry to a person, and community.
To begin
 with, travelling can help
individuals
 to see, experience and learn what is lying beyond the
world
 they live in. It helps to enrich travellers with knowledge about people,
cultures
 and history of the places they visit.
For example
, if you go to Japan, you can visit a
lot
 of Kimono shops, and learn in detail from the culturists
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how to wear their traditional costumes. Apart from that, you can
also
 learn about Japan’s dynasties when you visit their castles and see ancient items
such
 as
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 body armours, swords, and more. Gaining insights
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 other people’s
cultures
 can help
individuals
 to learn new perspectives, gain fresh ways of viewing things, and see the
world
 in a different picture.
In addition
 to that, travelling can help the host country boosts the revenue of their economy. To
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, incoming travellers from around the
world
 like to experience the hosting destinations’
cultures
, traditions and gastronomy.
As a result
,
such
 preferences will make local businesses
such
 as restaurants, shopping centres, and hotels, more profitable. When businesses are making money, they can afford to hire more people.
Subsequently
, more locals have
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a stable
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income
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incomes
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, and they can afford better livelihood. To conclude,
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the blooming
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blooming
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booming
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 tourism sector has a
lot
 of good impacts
to
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individuals
 and
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the community
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community
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communities
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 of the hosting destinations.
Individuals
 will learn a
lot
 about different
cultures
 and understand the
world
 better. As for
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society, tourism helps to boost their income.
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