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Explain how society benefits from using the internet

#society #internet
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The
internet
 has been around for a long time, it follows us in our daily life. Maybe
people
 are the one who spends hours and hours in front of the browsing
Internet
, but do
people
 actually know how society benefits from using the
internet
? So
firstly
,
Internet
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 is the biggest
worldwide
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 communication network of computers. The
internet
 has millions of smaller domestic, academic, business, and government networks, which together carry many different kinds of information.
People
 usually use the
Internet
 when they are text, call or search for something on Google or Safari. That’s why society has a lot and a lot of benefits from using the
internet
. The
first
 main benefit must be you can access a large amount of information or data on the
internet
.
People
 can look for anything on their phone, computer,… anywhere or anytime, the only thing they need is the
internet
. Another of the main and best-known benefits of the
internet
 is that it allows us to contact
people
 from everywhere on
this
 planet. It is easier to communicate,
also
this
 makes it easier for
people
 who lived aboard to keep in touch with their friends or family. In another way, especially in
this
 COVID- 19 disease. As a student, we use to have online learning. Any person who just needs a computer or a mobile phone with an
internet
 connection can learn about any topics, any new skills. That’s a huge advantage of the
internet
 at
this
 time, it helps to protect the community and yourself. Now
people
 don’t have to wait or go to the book shop to buy a book.
People
 simply need to search on the web and they are free to learn on any subject or topic, no matter how strange and rare.
However
, nothing is good in all ways, by using the
internet
, is an opportunity for hackers or criminals. They might steal your personal information,
otherwise
, some might bully you on the
internet
. In conclusion, the
internet
 has helped us in many ways,
people
 just need to know how to use it properly and it will show us how we benefit from using the
internet
.
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