Some people say that traveling abroad is necessary to get knowledge about other countries, while others suggest that TV and the internet can also help people know about foreign countries. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays,the number of
people
who are living in India has been decreasing because many individuals prefer to go Use synonyms
foreign
countries like the US and the UK for their higher studies,so many citizens claim that we can enhance our cognitive skills by commuting to another country.Change preposition
to foreign
In contrast
,others think that it is not necessary to commute because technology enables ample amenities to get news by just sitting at a home.Linking Words
this
essay will go into better detail on both the cases with my subject view.
To embark on,these days,scholars prefer to study in other Linking Words
nations
as facilities of education system Use synonyms
ensures
many job opportunities to students.Change the verb form
ensure
moreover
,they can Linking Words
also
do Linking Words
part time
job while studying.Add a hyphen
part-time
consequently
,they might be stayed independently without asking Linking Words
money
Change preposition
for money
to
Change preposition
from
parents
.Correct pronoun usage
their parents
furthermore
,they will be able to communicate with different Linking Words
persons
.Replace the word
people
as a result
,increases language skills as well as responsibility towards the family.Linking Words
for example
,if we will go to other Linking Words
nations
,nobody will come with us,Use synonyms
therefore
we have to Linking Words
takecare
of ourselves.ultimately,our responsibility might be increased.Correct your spelling
take care
additionally
,some Linking Words
people
usually go Use synonyms
to
trips to other Change preposition
on
nations
just for relaxation and to know about cultures.
On another hand,Use synonyms
although
technologies are available to commute Linking Words
but
still Remove the conjunction
apply
people
it is Use synonyms
Correct article usage
a wast
Correct your spelling
waste
wast
Correct your spelling
waste
of
time because we can Change preposition
apply
also
obtain other Linking Words
nations
news through the internet.I think,there are some reasons why Use synonyms
people
are refused to travel Use synonyms
another
kingdom.Change preposition
to another
firstly
,air transportation is the only way to commute Linking Words
other
places,but it is very expensive,Change preposition
to other
thus
it is hard to commute for the Linking Words
destitue
Correct your spelling
destitute
people
.Use synonyms
secondly
,face to face communication is limited among our family members.Linking Words
for instance
,if we move to another region,Linking Words
then
we will be no chance to see our parents regularly whenever we want,so at that time we can use phones for communicating Linking Words
to
them.
To conclude,many individuals have different opinions which vary from person to person,Change preposition
with
therefore
they only decide whether commuting to another region is best or not,but travelling abroad facilitates many opportunities in terms of getting jobs and knowledge.whereas,Linking Words
although
the internet provides many facilities to get news,many individuals like to go abroad.Linking Words
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