Some people think that it is necessary to travel abroad to learn about other countries, while other people think that it is not necessary to travel abroad because all the information can be seen on TV and the Internet. Discuss both the views and give your opinion
Many opine that to improve knowledge about other countries
humans
beings should travel abroad ,Change the noun form
human
however
, some people claim this
is not essential because of accessing all information
on the Internet and televisions. From my point of view ,I believe that to learn about other reasons searching on the internet and watching programmes on TV are not adequate.
Firstly
,in my opinion ,travelling abroad is a suitable method to upgrade our knowledge about other areas. For example
,to learn about traditional culture in a particular area the Internet can not produce real things that are related to the population. To collect enough information
we should touch other cultures and commence merging into them. This
could create an appropriate space to know about other regions all around the world. Therefore
,this
makes it clear why some significant information
related to other countries can not be found on diverse websites and programmes on TV.
By contrast
,others believe that this
is not a necessary thing. For instance
,these people have a common belief that in 21
century why we should have limited chances to learn about other regions and their cultures. Nowadays there are multiple technological gadgets that we can Replace the word
the 21st
exert
to watch films and documentaries related to conventional food , clothes and others to collect more Verb problem
use
information
about our favourite places. Additionally
,we can read strong essays that citizens in different cities in the world have been wroten
. Verb problem
written
This
would generate a suitable way for those who do not have any chance to travel. As a result
,it becomes apparent there is a conspicuous reason behind each claim via societies that we can not ignore.
To summarise ,I personally believe that to learn
something about various areas websites and other types of gadgets Change the verb form
learning
are
not enough. It is predicted that to continue creating trips by humans we will be blended into many cultures around the world in the near future.Correct subject-verb agreement
is
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Task Response
In the introduction, clearly state both views and the writer's opinion. Provide a balanced discussion on both perspectives throughout the essay.
Coherence and Cohesion
Ensure a clear structure with an introduction, body paragraphs for each viewpoint with supporting examples, and a conclusion summarizing the main points.