Money should be spent on creating new public buildings such as museums or town halls rather than renovating the existing ones. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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money

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should spend on new

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rather than

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renovating the old

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. New

buildings

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can be lived a longer period to

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the old

museums

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. I partially agree with

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statement and that essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons. To commence with, certainly, capital should be spent on new

museums

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or town halls rather than renovating the existing ones because these kinds of new

museums

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can be lived a longer period, new modernized

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can be built with a better interior design and all the amenities.

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, these can be given enormous

convenient

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to the population might be used happily.

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India has built new

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for the population

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of spending

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on renovating olds.

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,

money

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should be spent on new

buildings

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.

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, finance can spend on renovating old

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because these actions need a minimum amount of

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, resources, labour and everything.

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, demolishing's

building

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can be created numerous economic

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towards

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the nations.

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,

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western

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nation

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cannot demolish

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their old bildings,

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, they can renovate old

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.

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, renovating is the best idea rather than building new ones. To conclude, when all things considered, I am convinced that both have positives and negatives. The government should be spent

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on the proper and useful things. So, I partially agree with the thing indicated statements. I believe that the authority should be taken a better decision which is affordable or huge.