Some people think high school graduates should travel or work for a period of time instead of going directly to study at university. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of both approaches.
It is a contentious topic whether an individual should task or travel just before the
time
they are about to join their respective colleges for higher education.Use synonyms
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essay will explicate the merits of the above notion and in the latter half,will discuss its demerits.
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and foremost advantage of working or travelling after completing high Linking Words
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is the reduction of the burden on the family's shoulders.To be more precise,adolescents who struggle before enrolling in a course gathers ample money that they can invest to cover the hostel and the food expenditure during their Use synonyms
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report by World Happiness depicts that teenagers who were given the opportunity to work or travel were considered to be more successful in comparison with the students who directly started their studies without taking any break.Use synonyms
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Conversely
,the disadvantage of not going to the university immediately is there is the high probability that the learner's link may be broken with the studies and some of them may not leave their studies in between in spite of having a career by pursuing a higher degree,they get involved in day-to-today earning that makes their schedule hectic and it lefts them less Linking Words
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to think about future.Use synonyms
For example
,a recent report by the University of Alabama depicts that 65% of the youngsters who were involved in some work after high Linking Words
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curriculum because if there is a gap in their learning period they find it hard to remember or to learn the subjects.Use synonyms
As a result
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must be avoided at any cost.
In conclusion,keeping in view the above facts,it is clear that everything has its own pros and cons as some individuals give the opinion that Use synonyms
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graduates should get some working knowledge or must travel the world before joining the higher educational institute.Use synonyms
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,people must be enough to estimate the disadvantages.In Linking Words
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there is a plentiful benefit of pursuing task or travelling before joining the university Linking Words
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discussed above yet one cannot deny its disadvantages.Linking Words
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