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In the modern world there is a movement away from written exams to more practical assessments discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this trend.

#world #movement #exams #assessments #trend
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 world mostly
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 on practical
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 essay will explain the advantages and disadvantages.
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 of all, the advantages the
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 individuals are
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 nowadays children venture most of the
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 through hands, recently there was a 10year old boy who inverted a solar bus with no experience of theoretical
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 think that practical
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 is much more important, it should be included more to groom these young ones.
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, the disadvantage is that the generation of today is lazy to sit down and read for many hours , they prefer doing activities to activate their minds.
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, my son gets very sleepy when we sit down to do
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 but he gets very energetic with different
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 done by hands,
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 think practical
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 should not be ignored, it should be part of the learning curriculum. To sum up,
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 practical assessments outweigh
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,
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that written exams should be prioritized because
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 provide a background of your practical understanding
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