Some people say that traveling abroad is necessary to get knowledge about other countries, while others suggest that TV and the internet can also help people know about foreign countries. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

With the ease of transport and an emerging array of globalization, it has become significantly facile and

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to move across the

world

and plan

one

’s international voyage. To

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sizable number of people deem it extremely essential to get

one

’s horizon of

information

tumefied.

In contrast

, others do not really consider international trips to be as necessary as is touted, owing to the presence of the internet and digital gadgets

such

as television.

However

, I agree with the former school of thought that foreign excursions are indeed important for sundry reasons. In the subsequent paragraphs,

this

essay shall elucidate both viewpoints and illustrate my reasons as to why

such

tours are required. Modernization and the onset of the digital era have assuredly metamorphosed the way we used to live almost a decade or so ago. On the

one

hand, with televisions where

one

may get painted with the vibrant colours of the

world

, which

otherwise

were eccentric and unknown to

one

’s knowledge, the internet,

on the other hand

, has enveloped the

world

to the minuscule screens of our digital gadgets. And,

therefore

, some people contend and question the necessity of travelling to different locations just for the sake of

information

and entertainment.

Moreover

, Virtual Reality and Augmented Reality have made their belief and propulsion evermore herculean as

such

technologies create a simulation at par with the real-time venture into different nooks and corners of the

world

, where

information

, tradition, culture, and heritage are presented with a glimpse and tinge of shimmery globe-trotting. In stark contrast, the notion that supports and proselytizes the need to travel across the globe

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forth that an entire spectrum and gradations of cultural richness of a particular place

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better practically experienced rather than skimming it through via supported satellites and contrivances alike. I am completely convinced

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this

proposition. As a dictum goes, “What can be felt in reality can’t be heard in virtuality,” and that’s where the entire point of contrast and comparison comes to the foreground. People who travel and visit a place would any day outshine

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counterparts when it comes to knowledge,

information

, and experience

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upon landing in a region per se.

Moreover

, the recreational shades that

one

gets and the hormones that are released,

such

as Dopamine and Serotonin during

such

trips, tend to etch a profound impression

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the human nervous system, thereby enhancing the retention of the details

one

gets during the journey. Adding to that, the subsidiary perks

one

gets as stress relief, amicability among humans, peculiarities of a culture, so forth, and so on, are incongruent and

hence

, deeming international tours obligatory for a plethora of reasons.

Hence

,

to sum up

, we may say that though digitization and digital pangs have made life easier as far as minimum requirements are concerned,

such

as gathering

information

before actually planning a trip, finding a comfortable stay, etc., considering it to be a substitute to displace and eschew the thrills of real-time ventures is untenable.