You have seen an advertisement from a couple, who live in Australia, for someone to teach their two children your language for a year. Write a letter to the couple. In your letter explain why you think you would be suitable for the job say what else you could do for the family give reasons for wanting the job

#advertisement #couple #australia #someone #two #children #language #year #job

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

letter with regards to you about the advertisement which posted recently. I hope

this

job is still available. Let me briefly introduce myself. My name is Yan and I am a native Burmese speaker as well as a certified teacher. Currently, I am studying part-time at a university near your town for

further

studies. I have a few years of teaching experience, especially, kids before I came here. I hope these facts would be suitable for

this

job. I will be available on weekends for both online and physical classes. I have plenty of interesting strategies to teach your kids about my native language.

Moreover

, I can share our history, culture and stories. I would be very grateful if I get

this

job because teaching is one of my hobbies and I can get extra income for my expenses. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Yan

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Lexical resource: 9.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

TESOL certification
Experience in teaching children
Knowledge of Australian culture
Passion for language education
Flexible and adaptable
Design customized lesson plans
Patient and understanding
Strong communication skills
Interpersonal skills
Participate in family activities
Enthusiasm for cultural exchange

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