In the future, nobody wiil buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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a transformation to how people move to use their smartphone or
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computer
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read
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news or book
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buy the hardcover format. After pondering that opinion, I agree with the statement for many reasons, described in the following paragraphs.
To begin
,
some
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place
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in
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remote area can not access information
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online. The
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of
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that,
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not
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provides
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internet
infrasutructure
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infrastructure
such
as electricity and wifi
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in developing countries.
Therefore
, the community do not ability consume information from
internet
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.
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, the families whose living in the Jaya Baya highlands can only surrender to get reading material from the volunteers every three months. Turning to the other side, Nowadays
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developing countries try to build the
internet
insfrastructres
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infrastructure
infrastructures
to make sure everyone will connect to
internet
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. It can be seen from every
individuals
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have
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their
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smartphone even in the small town or
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. So, It can improve the quality of discussion everywhere and free.
Moreover
, people do not need to pay the
Internet
platform
for
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read
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the
informations
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.
Therefore
, newspaper sales
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significantly
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. To summarize,
although
the
internet
infrasturcture
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infrastructure
is a challenge to completely replace the traditional method in
remote
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area
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.
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, many countries try to solve the problem with
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build
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that for feel the benefit
such
as free and easy
accsess
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access
to the tons of information.
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