Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television and the Internet have destroyed communication among friends and family.
Over the
last
two or three decades, technology has been developing tremendously, especially in
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on
an
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the
internet
. TV and internet
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the internet
provides
enormous Change the verb form
provide
entertainment
, as a result
, these are spoiled
conversation between close Add an article
a spoiled
circle
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circles
such
as frinds
and family. I strongly agree with Correct your spelling
friends
this
statement and that essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons.
Firstly
, certainly, these can destroy communication between the close surrounding people because today's mankind is addicted to watch
television for their entertainments, Change the verb form
watching
thus
, they ignore their friends
. Humankind suffered stress and depression numerously at present, so, they have a chance to overcome that which is an
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entertainment
while they give more attention to these activities instead
of taking friends
and family. For example
, Indian's teens do not talk much in their families because they like to get some fun from entertainment
activities. Hence
, these kinds of entertainment
can be destroyed talk between friends
and family.
Furthermore
, an
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the
internet
provides innumerable fun and entertainment
activities like social media, so, the population like to build a relationship in social media rather than direct contact. In addition
, if a person has a mobile or laptop with internet
connection, he would not need any person to talk Add an article
an internet
consequently
, mankind's connection between friends
and family might be reduced or destroyed. For instance
, a recent report by the Times of India said that more than 40% of Indian's never like to talk with their friends
and family due to addiction of
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to
internet
. Add an article
the internet
Then
, these are eliminated connections among friends
and family.
To conclude, TV and internet
are destroying conversations among the population's close circle due to addictions and Correct article usage
the internet
entertainment
. Therefore
, I strongly agree with this
statement in the above-mentioned details and I hope that humankind should spend some time with their family and friends
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