Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television and the Internet have destroyed communication among friends and family.

Over the
last
two or three decades, technology has been developing tremendously, especially
in
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internet
. TV and
internet
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the internet
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provides
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enormous
entertainment
,
as a result
, these are
spoiled
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conversation between close
circle
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such
as
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friends
and family. I strongly agree with
this
statement and that essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons.
Firstly
, certainly, these can destroy communication between the close surrounding people because today's mankind is addicted to
watch
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television for their entertainments,
thus
, they ignore their
friends
. Humankind suffered stress and depression numerously at present, so, they have a chance to overcome that which is
an
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entertainment
while they give more attention to these activities
instead
of taking
friends
and family.
For example
, Indian's teens do not talk much in their families because they like to get some fun from
entertainment
activities.
Hence
, these kinds of
entertainment
can be destroyed talk between
friends
and family.
Furthermore
,
an
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internet
provides innumerable fun and
entertainment
activities like social media, so, the population like to build a relationship in social media rather than direct contact.
In addition
, if a person has a mobile or laptop with
internet
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connection, he would not need any person to talk
consequently
, mankind's connection between
friends
and family might be reduced or destroyed.
For instance
, a recent report by the Times of India said that more than 40% of Indian's never like to talk with their
friends
and family due to addiction
of
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using
internet
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.
Then
, these are eliminated connections among
friends
and family. To conclude, TV and
internet
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are destroying conversations among the population's close circle due to addictions and
entertainment
.
Therefore
, I strongly agree with
this
statement in the above-mentioned details and I hope that humankind should spend some time with their family and
friends
.
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