Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television and the Internet have destroyed communication among friends and family.

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last
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two or three decades, technology has been developing tremendously, especially
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internet
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. TV and
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internet
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the internet
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provides
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enormous
entertainment
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,
as a result
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, these are
spoiled
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conversation between close
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such
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as
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friends
and family. I strongly agree with
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statement and that essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons.
Firstly
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, certainly, these can destroy communication between the close surrounding people because today's mankind is addicted to
watch
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television for their entertainments,
thus
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, they ignore their
friends
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. Humankind suffered stress and depression numerously at present, so, they have a chance to overcome that which is
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entertainment
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while they give more attention to these activities
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of taking
friends
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and family.
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, Indian's teens do not talk much in their families because they like to get some fun from
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activities.
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, these kinds of
entertainment
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can be destroyed talk between
friends
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and family.
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,
an
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internet
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provides innumerable fun and
entertainment
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activities like social media, so, the population like to build a relationship in social media rather than direct contact.
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, if a person has a mobile or laptop with
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internet
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connection, he would not need any person to talk
consequently
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, mankind's connection between
friends
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and family might be reduced or destroyed.
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, a recent report by the Times of India said that more than 40% of Indian's never like to talk with their
friends
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and family due to addiction
of
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using
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internet
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the internet
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.
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, these are eliminated connections among
friends
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and family. To conclude, TV and
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internet
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the internet
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are destroying conversations among the population's close circle due to addictions and
entertainment
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.
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, I strongly agree with
this
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statement in the above-mentioned details and I hope that humankind should spend some time with their family and
friends
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.
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