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being a celebrity-such as a famous film star or sports personality-brings problems as well as benefits. do you think being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?

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Nowadays,Positive and negative aspects of being a celebrity are the subject of many debates.
although
 being famous might have some drawbacks,I believe the merits are far more. On the one hand,many celebrities have announced that their biggest issue is a lack of privacy.They have mentioned that eating a simple meal in a random restaurant is a hard task for them because
people
 always trying to find out about every little detail happening in their lives.
Therefore
,they are unable to enjoy public places and activities like other
people
.
however
,I believe as a famous
figure
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 they are aware of
this problems
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this problem
these problems
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 and the responsibility that they have toward Society from
first
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 day .
Thus
,they have to cope with these problems whether they like it or not.
On the other hand
,having a lucrative career can provide a sense of satisfaction and better standards of living.
moreover
,they gain popularity in the community and they are highly respected everywhere.
for instance
,when you earn a decent amount of money
this
 not only affects your life but
also
 affects other
people
 around you because you have a wide range of options
such
 as donating money to charities and doing other good deeds that help
people
.
consequently
, it gives you the power to have a significant impact on your surroundings. in my personal opinion,despite having some drawbacks like lack of privacy, the merits of being a famous celebrity have a lot of merits.They have several powers and impact on
people
 and
this
 lead to a sense of satisfaction in their lives so benefits definitely outweigh the problems.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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