Some people think that governments should focus on reducing environmental pollution and housing problems to help people prevent illness and disease. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
What are the main responsibilities of
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government
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the governemt
disease
?
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infectious
people
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disease
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vacination
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.
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enforcing
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passed a law to control it.
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the USA
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government
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the governemt
prevent
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preventing
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believe
belive
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believe
problem
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coronavirus
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disease
showed us that there are more critical issues that should be covered by Change to a plural noun
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