Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
The opinion is divided as to whether or not important pieces of information in various fields be circulated without limitations.
Although
, some argue that there should not be any restriction Linking Words
of
data sharing from the latest discoveries, businesses and education, Change preposition
on
however
, I believe Linking Words
otherwise
. Linking Words
This
essay will discuss both views in detail followed by a reasoned conclusion Linking Words
thereafter
.
Linking Words
To begin
with, circulating knowledge is regarded as a means of bringing awareness to the public. Linking Words
As a result
, it is vital for individuals in various disciplines to gain the latest and conventional understanding in order to impact themselves and society positively. Linking Words
For instance
, through recent scientific Linking Words
studies
scientists have been able to associate the spread of COVID-19 to overcrowding and poor personal hygiene. Add a comma
studies,
Hence
the authorities were able to sensitize citizens on the importance of face masks and hand washing which markedly reduced the spread of the virus.
Linking Words
On the contrary
, there are greater benefits of limiting knowledge to the public despite the argument above. Linking Words
Firstly
, it is of national security not to divulge some pieces of information Linking Words
especially
regarding scientific biological warfare and nuclear weapons. Add the comma(s)
, especially
For example
, describing the knowledge of how to manufacture poisonous gases, atomic bombs and Linking Words
pandemics disease
can become detrimental if Fix the agreement mistake
pandemic diseases
such
data finds its way to terrorist groups. Linking Words
Thus
keeping that information away from the public is safer for everybody. Linking Words
Moreover
, breakthroughs in the field of academics like literature need recognition and prize awards. Linking Words
Therefore
, restricting access will help to reward the effort of the owner.
In conclusion, Linking Words
while
some are of the view that having unlimited access to ideas is important in awareness, I believe that reducing access is more beneficial in terms of safety for the country and rewarding of hard work by the discoverer.Linking Words
Submitted by joshuaosarenmwinda on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
coherence and cohesion
Ensure that the introduction clearly introduces the topic and provides an overview of the main points to be discussed in the essay. The conclusion should summarize the main arguments effectively.
task achievement
The essay adequately responds to the task by discussing both views and presenting a clear stance. Include more specific examples to support your points and make them more convincing.