In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

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anyone can acquire. These days, it comes in form of a rented

house

or as

one

's own

home

. Most people around the globe believe owning

one

is far much better than renting. Personally, I concur with

this

sentiment and believe it is a positive way.

Therefore

,

this

essay will highlight why people opt to have their own

house

as opposed to renting as well as why I believe

this

is a positive development.

To begin

with, unlike renting a

home

which presents with a burden of regular payments to the landlord, owning a

house

accords

one

with an opportunity to channel his

money

to care for other personal issues.

In other words

, the

money

that could be spent on rent can be used to improve a

person

's economic status in society and to assist others. To illustrate, if a

person

does not pay any rent because he is not in a rented

house

, the

money

could

instead

be used to assist the struggling family members and friends The positives that arise from owning a

house

can be proved by the following reason. Whenever an individual owns a

home

, he is at liberty to make any

adjustments

to it that he deems fit with the opposite being true had he been renting. To put

this

in perspective, a

person

renting a

home

should always seek

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approval from the landlord if he wishes to make any

adjustments

to the existing structure of a

house

something he is at liberty to do if he happened to the owner.

For example

, if due to the increase in the number of family

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members

a

person

renting decides to make some

adjustments

to the

house

by extending it, he can not go ahead with his plans

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without consulting the owner of that

house

and may not even get

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positive feedback despite his efforts. Henceforth,

that is

why I believe not renting is a positive situation. In conclusion,

although

a rented

house

may seem to be easily accessible by many, it bears more disadvantages than if the

house

belonged to an individual. The

money

spent on regular payments of rentals can be used to assist family and friends and allows

one

to make

adjustments

to the building whenever

neccessary

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necessary

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my opinion, is a positive situation.