In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

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of the most valued

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anyone can acquire. These days, it comes in form of a rented

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or as

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's own

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. Most people around the globe believe owning

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is far much better than renting. Personally, I concur with

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sentiment and believe it is a positive way.

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essay will highlight why people opt to have their own

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as opposed to renting as well as why I believe

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is a positive development.

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with, unlike renting a

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which presents with a burden of regular payments to the landlord, owning a

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accords

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with an opportunity to channel his

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to care for other personal issues.

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, the

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that could be spent on rent can be used to improve a

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's economic status in society and to assist others. To illustrate, if a

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does not pay any rent because he is not in a rented

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, the

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be used to assist the struggling family members and friends The positives that arise from owning a

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can be proved by the following reason. Whenever an individual owns a

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, he is at liberty to make any

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to it that he deems fit with the opposite being true had he been renting. To put

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in perspective, a

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renting a

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should always seek

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approval from the landlord if he wishes to make any

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to the existing structure of a

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something he is at liberty to do if he happened to the owner.

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, if due to the increase in the number of family

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members

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renting decides to make some

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to the

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by extending it, he can not go ahead with his plans

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without consulting the owner of that

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and may not even get

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positive feedback despite his efforts. Henceforth,

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why I believe not renting is a positive situation. In conclusion,

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a rented

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may seem to be easily accessible by many, it bears more disadvantages than if the

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belonged to an individual. The

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spent on regular payments of rentals can be used to assist family and friends and allows

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to make

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to the building whenever

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necessary

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my opinion, is a positive situation.