People say that it is a waste of time for high school students to learn literature at school. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

There are
people
who believe that
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literature
is not practical for high
school
students
.
Although
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literature
may not be desirable for some
students
and
people
,
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every one
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should be familiar with his own language and its
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literature
. Some
students
consider
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literature
out of no use in their
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life out of
school
.They believe
litrature
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literature
subject
boring which is not only a hard
subject
to learn, but
also
time consuming
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subject
in a way that
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them from, what in their opinion, more important subjects like math or physics.
Besides
, they usually get bad marks or even fail
this
subject
which makes them study
this
subject
once again during summer and ruin their spare time during
this
season.
In addition
, they believe they are fluent enough in their own language and
dont
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don't
need
litrature
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literature
after
school
so there is no reason to learn it which is not smart.
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is part of
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culture and roots. Far from what
people
do as their carrier after
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they belong to one community with a unique language in which most
people
are fanatic about them.
For instance
, when a national team of soccer win in
world
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cup almost all
people
become deeply pleased and glad without wondering if it is a waste of time watching soccer on T.V or
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a lot of money just to travel to the country hosting world cup only to be among the audience of their national team.
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influence our life
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the same way, we should be proud of our poems and
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literature
as without them we would not be defined as who we are now. In conclusion,
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the fact that some
people
and
students
are bored with
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literature
,
this
subject
must be instructed at
school
as it is a
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to life and souls.
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