In some cultures, childrens are often told they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?
In a few societies says by their
parents
to children
,if they endeavour in their life they will succeed in any phase. There are pros and cons of this
statement and I am going to discuss them in this
essay.
To begin
, nowadays young adults don'tt
have patience, they need instant results in any work,Correct your spelling
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,However
parents
teach them about mental fitness like doing yoga or meditation can calm their minds in any difficult situation. For ,example Indian parents
suggest their children
tutor to, in school time
they will teach pupils about meditation also
provide books of yoga gurus, motivational speakers or life coaches. So they can knowledge regarding mental health. Thus
parents
should also
teach their children
about mental health.
On the other hand
, few parents
continuously force children
to get good marks in exams and because of this
reason children
do hard work in exam time
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,However
children
don't score well in the exam. Because of ,that they will in depression, anxiety also
some time
they get heart attacks at this
age. For ,instance in Kerela one student tries to suicide for not being selected in IIT college. Ask this
student about this
incident they told them that his parents
are told him since his childhood that you have to become an engineer from IIT college. He studied intensive but he didn't achieve although
he is a very smart child he hasn't achieved their parent's dream that's why he did this
suicide attempt.
In conclusion, there are plus points in advising children
to try hard enough to succeed in any task, but at the same time
know their abilities and teach them smartly.Submitted by parmarjayraj338 on
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...