In many situations, people who break the law should be warned instead of punished. To what extent do you agree or disagree?.

Crime

has many levels. Some

crimes

are serious and some not. I believe punishment and warnings should be given due to the nature of the

crime

committed.

This

essay is categorize

crime

into two groups, the

first

one is the group

people

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who break the law should be warned, and the

second

is the group who should be punished.

To begin

with, it is important to establish that there are two levels of

crimes

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crime

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.

Firstly

, there are

crimes

that could harm, kill, and abuse

people

. These are

extremely

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an extremely

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serious

crime

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crimes

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that could increase

sufferning

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suffering

in the community.

For example

, killing is an act

could

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that could

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destroy many households, and

this

is because when an individuals kill a father

this

might have many consequences in the future. In fact, many researchers have come to the

conculsion

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conclusion

that growing without a father or mother might affect the behaviour of the youngster negatively.

Also

, there is another

crime

that could affect individuals, families, and

economy

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the economy

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which is the act of robbery. When an

employe

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employee

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decides to steal money from their job

this

could lead that company to

bankrupt

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which means that many employees might lose their source

on

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income.

Secondly

, there is the type of

crime

that could not destroy the social fabric, and

this

is because of its level of seriousness. Still, society can label them as

crime

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, and when someone

commit

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this

felony should not be punished.

Thus

, when a student cheats during the exam it would not be rational to send that student to

the

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prison, so giving them a formal notice would be enough.

Moreover

, another type of

crime

that individuals should be warned

such

as sharing

study

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materials. No one should say that

plagrism

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plagiarism

is an acceptable act;

however

, I think we must shed the light

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why

people

copying

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printed

book

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from each other. Namely, in a school, a college, and university students come from different backgrounds and

ethnics

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, so not all the students could afford

buying

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all the required materials. In conclusion, there are groups that think that

people

should be

punshied

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punished

the moment they commit the

crime

, while others believe that there are

crime

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crimes

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indivdiuals

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individuals

should be warned

.

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On balance,

however

, I tend to believe that we should not equalize between all

sort

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of

crimes

, and the main reason is that I think that there is a difference between equality and justice.