In the future, nobody will buy printed newspaper or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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These days, the increasing

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of mobiles and tablets

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resulted in more use of digital newspapers and

books

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some people still prefer to use the

oldfashioned

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way. The question is whether in the future anyone will use printed

books

and

newspaper

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or not. On the one hand, digital

publicitaion

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publication

publications

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more environmental-friendly. There used to cut

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number

of trees in order to print the daily magazine and newspaper, causing

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deforestation

in different places all over the world. Amazon in Brazil is an obvious

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example

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, where deforestation is speeding up.

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, people can have the benefits of having

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number

books

in their

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devices

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instead

of carrying a heavy and a limited

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books

On the other hand

, people experience a real feeling of reading by the paper

books

. Reading,

noteing

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nothing

noting

notes

, and marking are the most enjoyable factors during reading a book.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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4 paragraphs

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

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Technological advancements
Digital content
Environmental concerns
Tactile experience
Production costs
Distribution costs
Digital divide
Digital fatigue
Print media
Credibility
Permanence
Collectibility
Aesthetic value

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