In the future, nobody will buy printed newspaper or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

These days, the increasing
number
of mobiles and tablets
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resulted in more use of digital newspapers and
books
.
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some people still prefer to use the
oldfashioned
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way. The question is whether in the future anyone will use printed
books
and
newspaper
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or not. On the one hand, digital
publicitaion
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publication
publications
are
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more environmental-friendly. There used to cut
vast
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number
of trees in order to print the daily magazine and newspaper, causing
deforstaion
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deforestation
in different places all over the world. Amazon in Brazil is an obvious
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example
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, where deforestation is speeding up.
Furthermore
, people can have the benefits of having
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number
of
books
in their
devieces
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devices
device
instead
of carrying a heavy and a limited
number
of
books
.
On the other hand
, people experience a real feeling of reading by the paper
books
. Reading,
noteing
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nothing
noting
notes
, and marking are the most enjoyable factors during reading a book.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Technological advancements
  • Digital content
  • Environmental concerns
  • Tactile experience
  • Production costs
  • Distribution costs
  • Digital divide
  • Digital fatigue
  • Print media
  • Credibility
  • Permanence
  • Collectibility
  • Aesthetic value
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