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Nowadays, most people try to balance between work and other part of lives. Unfortunately, not many achieve this balance. What are the problems of this? Suggest some solutions to solve the problem?

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Having a
balance
 between
work
 and
life
 has been a dream and goal for a lot of
people
.
Although
, it is not easy to achieve said
balance
.
This
 essay will discuss the main problems of achieving
this
balance
, which
are
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 lack of
time
management
 and
stress
,
then
 it will provide the solutions to the problem. The two biggest problems to achieving a
work
-
life
balance
 are a lack of
time
management
 and experiencing
stress
. Having poor
time
management
 skills would lead to disruption in a person's working
hour
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hours
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, social activities, and resting
time
. Without managing
time
 properly,
people
 may lose a big part of their day to only one aspect of their needs, whether it's limited to finishing a job task but not getting enough rest, or relaxing too much and slacking off. Another huge problem
people
 might encounter while trying to achieve a
work
-
life
balance
,
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 is stressing too much.
People
 might worry too hard
in
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about
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 trying to achieve
this
balance
, ending up messing
their
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with their
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work
 and
life
 activities even more. The solution to the
first
 problem is sharpening your
time
management
 skills by using helpful tools,
such
 as calendars, to-do lists, and schedules. Tools that help us divide our
time
 and plan ahead will help us
take
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make
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 conscious decisions, avoiding
us
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apply
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from
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issues
such
 as working or relaxing too often. Meanwhile, reflecting on
ourself
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ourselves
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 and our
goal
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goals
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 through journals and meditation might help reduce
stress
.
Instead
 of focusing too much on how to achieve a perfect
work
 and
life
balance
 as soon as possible, think of it as a long journey that requires patience. It is important to remember that it's okay to make mistakes in managing your
time
,
work
, or other activities. In conclusion, the main problems that
people
 usually face while trying to achieve a
work
 and
life
balance
 are
lack
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a lack
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 of
time
management
 and
stress
. These can be easily solved by dividing our
time
, planning ahead, and reflecting on our goal daily.
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