In the future all cars, buses and truks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

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It is argued that all the transport in the future will become autonomous, and the drivers will no longer be required.
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will result in some
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losing their jobs, I believe that the benefits far outweigh the drawbacks because of the convenience these vehicles will provide. The main disadvantage of driverless vehicles is that many
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will become jobless. At present, almost 10% of the earth's total workforce is involved directly or indirectly in transporting
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, goods and other things.
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if every vehicle on the streets will have no driver, all these
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would not be required for driving.
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, I believe that the world is changing constantly since the beginning of time, and with these
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our way of working
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evolved and
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of that jobs are
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in new sectors. These
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can apply for jobs in
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.
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, 5o years back IT industry was nearly non-existent. The primary benefit of these vehicles will be the easiness and less dependency on drivers. That is because a number of
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at present don't know how to drive.
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, children and old
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are
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not allowed to drive. Whenever these
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have to go somewhere they are dependent on another person to take them.
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30% of Indian citizens, who are eligible for driving don't know how to do that.
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I am of the opinion that the advantages of driverless cars, buses and trucks are far superior. In conclusion,
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a few
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will have to switch careers, much more will benefit from
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society. For
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, I think the positives outnumber the negatives.
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