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In the future all cars, buses and truks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

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It is argued that all the transport in the future will become autonomous, and the drivers will no longer be required.
Although
this
 will result in some
people
 losing their jobs, I believe that the benefits far outweigh the drawbacks because of the convenience these vehicles will provide. The main disadvantage of driverless vehicles is that many
people
 will become jobless. At present, almost 10% of the earth's total workforce is involved directly or indirectly in transporting
people
, goods and other things.
Consequently
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 if every vehicle on the streets will have no driver, all these
people
 would not be required for driving.
However
, I believe that the world is changing constantly since the beginning of time, and with these
changes
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 our way of working
have
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also
 evolved and
as a result
 of that jobs are
producing
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 in new sectors. These
people
 can apply for jobs in
those sector
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.
For example
, 5o years back IT industry was nearly non-existent. The primary benefit of these vehicles will be the easiness and less dependency on drivers. That is because a number of
people
 at present don't know how to drive.
Moreover
, children and old
people
 are
also
 not allowed to drive. Whenever these
people
 have to go somewhere they are dependent on another person to take them.
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example
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 30% of Indian citizens, who are eligible for driving don't know how to do that.
Therefore
 I am of the opinion that the advantages of driverless cars, buses and trucks are far superior. In conclusion,
although
 a few
people
 will have to switch careers, much more will benefit from
this
 transformation in
the
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society. For
this
 , I think the positives outnumber the negatives.
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