In the future all cars, buses and truks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?
It is argued that all the transport in the future will become autonomous, and the drivers will no longer be required . if every vehicle on the streets our way 30% of Indian citizens, who are eligible for driving don't know how to do that.
Although
this
will result in some people
losing their jobs, I believe that the benefits far outweigh the drawbacks because of the convenience these vehicles will provide. The main disadvantage of driver-less
vehicles is that many Correct your spelling
driverless
people
will become jobless. At present, almost 10% of the earth's total workforce is involved directly or indirectly in transporting people
, goods and other things. Consequently
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However
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has
also
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people
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For example
, 50 years back
IT industry was nearly non-existent. The primary benefit of these vehicles will be the easiness and less dependency on drivers. That is because a number of Rephrase
ago
people
at present don't know how to drive. Moreover
, children and old people
are also
not allowed to drive. Whenever these people
have to go somewhere they are dependent on another person to take them. For example
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Therefore
I am of the opinion that the advantages of driver-less cars, buses and trucks are far superior. In conclusion , although
a few people
will have to switch careers, much
more will benefit from Fix the agreement mistake
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion