In the future all cars, buses and truks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

It is argued that all the transport in the future will become autonomous, and the drivers will no longer be required .
Although
this
will result in some
people
losing their jobs, I believe that the benefits far outweigh the drawbacks because of the convenience these vehicles will provide. The main disadvantage of
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vehicles is that many
people
will become jobless. At present, almost 10% of the earth's total workforce is involved directly or indirectly in transporting
people
, goods and other things.
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if every vehicle on the streets
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no driver, all these
people
would not be required
for driving
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.
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, I believe that the world
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changing constantly since the beginning of time, and with these changes
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our way
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evolved and
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jobs are
producing
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in new sectors. These
people
can apply for jobs in
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.
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IT industry was nearly non-existent. The primary benefit of these vehicles will be the easiness and less dependency on drivers. That is because a number of
people
at present don't know how to drive.
Moreover
, children and old
people
are
also
not allowed to drive. Whenever these
people
have to go somewhere they are dependent on another person to take them.
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30% of Indian citizens, who are eligible for driving don't know how to do that.
Therefore
I am of the opinion that the advantages of driver-less cars, buses and trucks are far superior. In conclusion ,
although
a few
people
will have to switch careers,
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society. For
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, I think the positives outnumber the negatives.
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