Some people think that the main purpose of school is to turn children into good citizens and trainees rather than to benefit them as individuals
The vast majority of the population deems that the fundamental duty of the school is to convert graders into decent dwellers and employees rather than to improve them as individuals.
Although
I advocate strongly with the opinion of the majority, I think that schools Linking Words
also
should care about each child as an individual.
On the one hand, it is essential children are prepared to be members of society. Education gives students more skills and knowledge. Linking Words
Likewise
, well-educated children can learn to be independent as well as Linking Words
this
helps to find work. In Linking Words
this
way, children become altruistic people, they tend to contribute positively to society. Linking Words
Moreover
, schools aim to teach the young generation moral values Linking Words
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as tolerance and sharing. Linking Words
For example
, our school curriculums include respecting teachers as well as other junior and senior graders, doing their homework, keeping the environment and loving their motherland.
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On the other hand
, emphasizing the capacity of each child helps to blossom hidden abilities. If the academy implements Linking Words
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tendency, most graders can know anything related to their favourite subject as well as they will be professional trainees in the future. Linking Words
Furthermore
, a huge number of students prefer to study as individuals. Linking Words
For instance
, among schoolers conducted a survey about which one better general or individual study in the one school of the UK. Linking Words
This
research showed that almost 70% of students voted for the letter.
In conclusion, I think both of them play a vital role in our society. Linking Words
However
, schools should turn kids into good citizens and trainees.Linking Words
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