summerise the information, selecting and reporting

The line graph describes the changes and
decline
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overall in the share price in a five-year
periiod
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period
from January 2006 to December 2010. At the
begining
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beginning
of the period, the share price was at 13
euros
,
then
there was a fluctuation until mid-2006.
This
figure for experienced an increase 21
euros
to 31
euros
and the share price was fluctuated until reached peak situation in 2008, with an average of 30
euros
, but
this
was reduced significantly in mid-2008, which is 8
euros
two years later, there was experienced the same amount of 2006 at
beginning
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a beginning
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period, which is 13
euros
in
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at
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the end of the period.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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