Nowadays in many countries household waste e.g. food packaging is increasing day by day. What are the causes for that? How can this problem be solved?
Modernisation comes with bane and boom, packaging is one of the inventions that help to carry and store products. In most nations, house garbage is related to package material and it increases rapidly every year. There are various reasons why is
this
happening and steps
are needed to solve this
global issue.
The factors that are responsible for house waste is
that Correct subject-verb agreement
are
people
are busy and have a hectic schedule due to
this
most of the time they order food from restaurants and that comes with packaging material, hence
it enhances trash
material in the house. Furthermore
, many companies are using plastic bags and other materials to wrap their products, cover
Correct word choice
and cover
with
two to three layers of packing Correct pronoun usage
them with
that
Correct pronoun usage
apply
increase
the garbage. Wrong verb form
increasing
For example
, in a recent survey, many people
in the USA liked to order from online applications and demand increase
up to 20%. Wrong verb form
increased
Whereas
, the companies and shop owners used 3 layer packaging, first bubble wrap then
plastic bag
and Fix the agreement mistake
bags
in
Rephrase
lastly
last
cardboard box
, all these wrapping Fix the agreement mistake
boxes
material
become Fix the agreement mistake
materials
trash
after it opened.
There are some steps
to reduce household trash
. To begin
with, the Government should take some steps
against companies to reduce the packaging material on their delivery products in owing this
every little effort become revolutionary steps
in the further
time period. Moreover
, jute and bamboo are alternative methods for packaging because this
Correct pronoun usage
these
is
biodegradable materials. Correct subject-verb agreement
are
For example
, in India, the authorities banned plastic material
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materials
due to
this
many people
are using jute product
and other trees based Fix the agreement mistake
products
product
, Fix the agreement mistake
products
this
makes a deduction in the household trash
because this
is a recycled product and many small scale
industries Add a hyphen
small-scale
take
great benefit from it.
Verb problem
apply
To conclude
, "every lock has its key." people
find a way to solve their problems. In this
materialistic world, a
packaging material is a need but Correct article usage
apply
people
have to find some material that reduces their trash
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