Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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There is an opinion that at school, students have to participate in unpaid services
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charity funds, helping
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or teaching youngers sports. I think I will not agree with
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statement for several reasons, which I will write below.
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, I think that every student should
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decide about that himself. He has to be a choice: whether wants to be part of
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community or not. I think we can not force him to do what he does not want.
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, maybe he prefers to play or
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some own experiment, or at all attend to
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subjects or courses. The
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reason follows from the
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. What I need is a do developing things. I consider that every child, especially in cities, should do seeking of their hobbies. At least, among of many courses can be find something that can affect to their future.
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, it can be swimming, skating or courses of languages or physics. Eventually, I think all the above activities have to do well-wishers. It has to be the desire of every person. Only
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it will be with love and everyone will be happy. In conclusion, I disagree with that claim, because unpaid services have to go from the heart. At school, it has to be
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as educational hour and it should be held often. The students have to be known that it is encouraged.
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, it should be dedicated not many time and students always have to be a time to
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