Successful companies use advertising to make more sales. What can make an advertisement very effective? Do you think this is a bad or a good thing for the society?

In the present time , advertising

have

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become more successful

of

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both new and old production .

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with the progress that we

have

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it is very essential . I will discuss impact adv on some

sales

and give my believe if it would be good or bad . In

this

time , it

have

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become successful

companies

by

use

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advertising to make more

sales

.

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, it more effectively of through

this

way on the

people

who

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it

make

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more buy

any thing

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anything

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you watching in TV or social media .

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companies

it

is acquire

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more money from social media .

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, snap chat

also

some famous

person

it made some advertising .

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, there are

companies

it has not popularity . More of the institute in the present day it gets aware more than before years .

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,

people

it has become more watching . There are many

products

that increase by rate watching because of adv.

Moreover

, it has many merits for

this

way . Any

person

if does not like to go mall just see the

sales

and order that .

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, knowing if it was the

products

it is very pretty or bad . There is pay especially for the

products

and the

people

you can write your commands and evaluation the production . And the cons of adv might can the praise of

sales

it is very expensive and there

are

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no discount for that . Might some of

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the

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it

is lie

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. Some

companies

it

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gives

person

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a person

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to make it and should the

person

it remember the product because the

people

it

buy

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that but other company it

is lie

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just want to acquire

sales

. In

conclude

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, there are merits and demerits

for

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the

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advertising . I believe it is very good and it has many effective for

people

but I wish some company it is attention about credibility the

products

.