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It is currently believed that children’s behaviour and misconduct is due to the lack of strict discipline and punishment applied by parents. Do you agree or disagree with the statment?

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Nowadays parenting models have changed. There is a lot of information about how to
rise
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children
, whereas it is so difficult to find the keys or
reasons
 for the misconduct of kids. It is said that
children
 bad behaviour is a result of
parents
 lack of discipline. In front of
this
 argument, I will partially agree with the statement, whereas all
reasons
 will be explained as follows.
To begin
 with, there are two main
reasons
 in favour of
this
 issue. The
first
 reason is, that parenting models have changed a lot in recent years.
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 days we can find a wide range of information about parenthood, starting from books to social media. There exist so many opinions and
reasons
 that are difficult to follow, because
parents
 do not really know what applies the best for their
children
. Another reason is the lack of
attention
. Today, both
parents
 have to work to maintain a stable life,
therefore
children
 are raised without
parents
attention
 and support, which leads to
children
's misconduct and tantrums to obtain the desired
attention
.
On the other hand
, there is not always
parents
 fault. Sometimes,
children
 are surrounded by bad influences, especially when they are in the teenage stage. So, it is difficult to explain to your
teenager
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 son or daughter that their best friends have
bad
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 influence on them and they change their behaviour. Cause on
this
 stage, teenagers
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 to
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 that
parents
 are their enemies, what difficult their education
.
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 In conclusion, I would say that
children
 misconduct is affected by both parties,
parents
’ leniency and external influence. I will recommend that
parents
 should focus on making their
children
 happy,
to
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pay
attention
 when it is needed and ask for help or suggestions from people with experience in growing
children
,
for example
, their own
parents
. For sure they will obtain great advice.
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