Nowadays people waste a lot of food that was bought from shops and restaurants. Why do you think people waste food? What can be done to reduce the amount of food they throw away?

There are tons of
food
being thrown away by our local supermarkets, markets and restaurants. The
food
that we let go are in huge amounts and could feed the hungry population twice and end world hunger. In
this
essay, I will discuss the reasons why we waste
food
and the solution to
this
problem.
Firstly
, customers who dine out could leave
food
uneaten because of bad taste.
Secondly
, vegetables harvested are not all pretty, the less
aesthestic
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aesthetic
looking ones usually get discarded because supermarkets wouldn’t want to buy them. There is a misconception in the consumer’s mind that it is better to buy good looking fruits and vegetables even though the deformed ones taste the same and are ok to eat as well.
Thirdly
, some people just spend too much money buying and storing
food
they might not need and these foods end up expiring. In order to end
this
wasting frenzy, we could start with
food
distributors
first
.
For example
, we can gather ugly fruits and veggies that the farmer couldn’t sell and sell these for much cheaper to the poor
instead
of throwing them away. We can educate people on the misconception of less good looking
food
and let them know that it is ok to eat them.
Furthermore
, we have to bring awareness about world hunger and come up with a solution to donate
food
instead
of wasting it.
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