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Formal examinations are the only effective way to assess a student's performance. Continual assessment such as course work and projects is not a satisfactory way to do this. Do you agree or disagree?

#examinations #student #performance #course #work #projects
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 development of students in all spheres of life
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team work
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, etc. Whereas,
final
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 term exam is a part of
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. In my opinion, students gain extra with practical hands-on in a subject which provides wide exposure, and while doing projects in a team broadens their horizon of interpersonal development.
Firstly
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 fieldwork in mark evaluation. The practical work along with theory helps in comprehending the subject in depth.
For example
, it is challenging to memorize complex scientific theory, but a demo in
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 makes it simplified.
Moreover
, it becomes easier for kids to reciprocate the learnings.
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, practical work plays a crucial role in developing cognitive thinking.
Secondly
, completing assignments in a group provides an opportunity towards learning attitude and sharing an accountable thought process to generate more ideas together.
Fo
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 example, research revealed that many group
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have
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 left a remarkable impact on children, in
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 term they turned out to be effective in communication.It provides a platform to represent individual thoughts.
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 part of
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curriculum
curriculumn
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, where one learns how to delegate a task within
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. In conclusion,
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 of
education
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institute
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 should consider
growth
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 of students in all aspects
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 only one factor as a part of marks evaluation.
Although
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 theory upholds the base of learning other, factors
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accounts
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equal
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 weightage to mark grades in report cards.
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