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The pie chart describes information about the UK mankind had used in five modes of transportations Walking,
Car
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, Train, Bicycle and Bus for work or study in a college in two differents years 2004 and 2009. Overall,
Car
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and Bicycle were the highest modes of transportations in the UK while Train was the least
preference
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method. According to the graph illustrates,
Car
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was experienced the popular mode of transport in 2004, which is just above half, but five years later,
Car
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usage was reduced significantly by 23 per cent. The bus was the
second
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-largest method of transportation in 2004, with an average of just above a
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,
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, in 2009,
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figure had increased by 13 per cent. In terms of
Bicycle
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Bicycles
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, in 2004, was just below one out of ten,
in
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the contrary, five years later, British people had used more
this
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method to 16 per cent.
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, Walking and TRain ways of transportations were increased to compared given the previous year, from 4% to 6% and from 3% through 4% respectively.

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