You recently organised an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter • say what the participants liked about the hotel • explain why they were unhappy about the food • suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in future
Dear Sir or Madam,
This
letter has been penned down to bring in
your kind attention that I had a full-day office meeting at your hotel. There were 20 participants in total and everyone liked the ambience and lighting of your hotel. Change preposition
to
Moreover
, your staff was very welcoming and helpful.
However
, attendees were quite unhappy about the food served. First
of all, it was very spicy and there was oil floating all over the plate. Secondly
, one of the participants found hair in his dish, which was very unprofessional and unhygienic. This
was not at all expected from a professional restaurant like yours. Lastly
, serving quantity seems less to a few attendees.
To solve this
problem, I would suggest you to
inform your kitchen staff to maintain good hygiene. Remove the particle
apply
Also
, make sure to use less quantity of oil and rather increase the quality of the food served.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Ammy WatsonSubmitted by dilpreet.kaur992 on
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