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A magazine wants to include contributions for its readers from an article called ‘The book that influenced me most.’ Write a letter to the editor of the magazine about the book that influenced you most. In your letter Describe what this book was about Explain how this book influenced you Say whether this book would be likely to influence other people

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Dear Sir or Madam, In your latest
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magazine, it was announced that anyone who wants to contribute to the article called ’The
book
 that influenced me most’ is welcome to do so.
Therefore
, I want to take that opportunity and share my experience. The
book
 ‘The
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 of
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 written by Ruth A. Drayer, the numerologist. There she shared her knowledge on how the numbers are showing their real power and energy. The first part of the
book
 contains descriptions
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 each number, separately, and by the very end of the
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 numerology
this
 was the first
book
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read, and,
as a result
, after I
while
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 level of
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 myself and others much better, like why there are different kinds of
behavior
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, personalities, and sacrifices. Every time I reread the
book
 it shows me new ideas of how to pursue
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numerology.
For
this
 reason, I believe anyone who would like to know how the numbers work in their own way,
this
 is one of the best places where information could be found and would
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 influence if they share
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 interest in
this
 field like I do. I hope my experience is worth sharing, if any
further
 details are necessary, please let me know. Yours faithfully, Nevena Rankovic
Submitted by ognjenrankovic1989 on

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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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