Some people believe that governments are spending more money on wild life. This money should be used for other works. Do you agree or disagree?

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Hi Walter, I am sending

this

email to follow up on tomorrow's presentation. I think it's better if you present your work on Toucan

instead

of presenting mine.

Also

, I was wondering if you can combine the individual stories you created into one dashboard, that would be great. Or you can transfer the chapters you created into our instance, and

then

I can build the dashboard as well. It's up to you. Thanks for your help, Walter. and let me know if I can help with anything. Regards,George

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Sentence 3 - Discussion
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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.5

Complete response

4.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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