Some people believe that international sporting events are the ideal opportunity to show the world the qualities of the hosting nation. Others believe that these events are mainly a large unjustifiable expense. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Certain
people
are of the opinion that international sporting
events
might provide countries
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ideal platform to exhibit their skills and positives while others believe that it is a frivolous expenditure. I agree
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That sporting
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events
are vital for countries to put their prominence
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the global world map by showcasing their Qualities.
Firstly
,
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will discuss the
economics
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benefits of
such
events
and
secondly
, the social impact it has on the host
country
.
To begin
with, An international sporting event can provide a lot of boost to the economy of the
country
.
Furthermore
, there is a lot of
preperatory
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preparatory
work that goes in
beofre
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before
hosting
such
an event in terms of
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the requisite infrastructure. Which in turn, generates employment for the local workforce and income.
For example
, Before the commonwealth games were supposed to be hosted in
delhi
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a lot of sporting complexes were
to
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built for
the
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various sports.
Huge
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amount of skilled and unskilled
people
were
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engaged.
Besides
, employability
it
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also
provides the requisite facilities for future sports in the
country
. Another reason
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is the cultural
amalgation
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amalgamation
& exchange of ideas that
such
events
provide. A world
congregration
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congregation
of
such
type are of massive magnitude attracting athletes, dignitaries and
people
from different countries and cultures.
For instance
, the football world cup held in a period of 4 years attracts a wide diaspora of
people
from different ethnicity with a single objective of enjoying the game.
Consequently
, allowing
people
to understand the culture of the
country
hosting the games while enjoying their hospitality In conclusion, The hosting of games is beneficial not just to the economy but
also
vital for the cultural and social impacts on the communities as a whole. In my
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Any nation must not let go of the opportunity to be a part of conducting
an
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sporting occasion
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