Some people believe that the fittest and strongest individuals and teams always success in sports. Others think that success in sports depends on mental attitudes. Discuss both views and give your opinions.

Winning a match is important,

that is

why many

teams

or individuals train so hard to improve their

skills

and

teamworks

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teamwork

. But,

skills

alone are not

sufficients

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sufficient

to

maintains

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elite

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an elite

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position in competitive

sports

, especially if

participates

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participating

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as a team. There is something that can hold down each individuals ego,

that is

mental

attitudes

. In

this

essay,

i

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I

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am going to explain both

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my view

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view

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views

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and my opinions.

Firstly

,

sports

are physical

games

which is consist of body

contacts

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contact

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. The strongest and the fittest

teams

, usually have

higher

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a higher

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chance

for

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of

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winning the

games

. They always build their shapes,

honing

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hone

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their

skills

, and build

teamworks

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teamwork

team works

.

Teams

that lack in those

trainings

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training

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, will always found difficult to carry the

games

.

For Example

, Real Madrid FC which consist of many worlds class

footbal

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football

players

, will always found easy to

winning

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win

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the competition.

This

is reasonable

,

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because Real Madrid coaches always put the best and the strongest

players

in the

teams

.

However

, some people say that mental

attitudes

plays

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play

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better roles rather than

skills

or physics. Each

players

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player

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should encourage the basic

principals

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principles

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of

sports

, those are

sportmanships

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sportsmanship

and integrities. Because

this

will

affects

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affect

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players

behaviour inside or outside the fields. Individuals or

teams

with greater mental

attitudes

never

worries

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worry

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on

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about

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losing the

games

. They will not blame

particural

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particular

team-mates

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teammates

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or coaches for failing the

games

. As

the

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a

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results

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result

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, they can maintain their level

beyonds

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beyond

the

averages

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average

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teams

. In conclusion, even though the fittest and strongest

teams

deserve to carry the victory,

but

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apply

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mental

attitudes

plays

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play

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greater roles in

sports

. They do not give up easily, they will not

blames

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blame

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the

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apply

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others and they always have the

confidences

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confidence

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even

thogh

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though

their opponents is better in term of

skills

and physics