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The bar chart describes information about the
population
 using
internet
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 in five various
nationsSpain
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nations Spain
, France, Sweden, Germany and the
UK
 while the pie chart illustrates the average spending on the
internet
 for shopping in these countries units are measured in percentages and per
person
. Overall, Sweden
population
 is used more
internet
, but the
UK
 is the highest of using
internet
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 for shopping meanwhile Spain is the least usage of
internet
 in these both
catogeries
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categories
. According to the bar chart shows, Sweden is using the highest
internet
 to 35 per cent while spending the
internet
 is just above three quarter per
person
. The
UK
population
 is the
second
-largest
population
 of using the
internet
, which is a fifth while the
UK
 is the highest per
person
 is used
internet
 for shopping, with an average of 87. Germany is 15% of consuming the
internet
 and using
internet
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 for shopping to 46 per
person
. In terms of France
population
 is consuming the
internet
 to one out of ten and spending
internet
 for purchasing goods to 57 per
person
.
In contrast
, Spain is the least of using
internet
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both
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population
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 and
shopping
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, which is 5 per cent and 10 per
person
 respectively.
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