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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

#food #drink #products #levels #sugar #health #people
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Today, almost everyone yearns to consume a sugary meal or drink.
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,
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 brings with it more undesirable effects on human health than good.
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, because sweetened
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 have substantial amounts of
sugar
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 to the extent that it negatively alters health, they should be sold at higher
prices
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 in order to discourage
people
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 from eating them. Personally, I concur with
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 notion. In
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 essay, I will highlight the reasons why
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 is my view.
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 with, sugary food and drinks increase the risk of a person suffering from decaying teeth. To put
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 in perspective, when one consumes high levels of
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 even just once, he is prone to bacterial invasion in the mouth and to the eventual tooth problem. Take,
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, a study conducted by the ministry of health in Malawi on the effects of sugary
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 on teeth, it was proved that the likelihood of one suffering from tooth illnesses increased to 90 per cent.
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 can only be avoided if
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products
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'
prices
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 are hicked in order to deter
people
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 from consuming them.
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, once the high-level
sugar
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 content
products
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 have their
prices
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 raised, it will help lessen the growing rate of malnutrition among many.
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, due to the fact that
sugar
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 gives energy to
people
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 for longer periods than any other,
people
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 are less likely to eat another meal for a prolonged period
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 resulting in long hours of starvation.
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, if a person eats high
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 content
foods
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, he will be energetic for the
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 6 hours
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 the eventual starvation and the resulting malnutrition. Henceforth, if
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products
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 were made expensive,
people
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 will be able to have frequent meals from other sources of energy-giving
foods
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.
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 is why I strongly agree with the urge to increase the
prices
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 of high
sugar
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 level
foods
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. In conclusion, whether
people
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 derive more energy from high
sugar
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 level
foods
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 or not, it bears more drawbacks than good which result in mouth disease and
people
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 missing meals. In my opinion, it is the right thing to do in order to preserve many
people
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's lives.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • health problems
  • manufactured food and drink products
  • sugary products
  • excessive sugar consumption
  • discourage
  • promote
  • healthier choices
  • reduce
  • increased taxes
  • fund
  • health education
  • prevention programs
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