Some people think the main purpose of school is to turn children into good citizens and workers, rather than to benefit them as individuals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Part of the community thinks that
schools
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are meant to create responsible citizens
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of benefitting
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on an individual level specifically. I strongly agree with the
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and will explain them in my essay.
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play a vital role in any individuals growth. A child spends approximately 15 to 17 years of his or her total life in schooling. There are a plethora of roles that
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enact in
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's life. Students start to learn differentiating between good and bad in their pre-teens from school which is one of the significant attributes.
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,
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should inculcate important social
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rather than just keeping them focused on books and careers.
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, they should do social excursions like visiting elderly homes, helping handicapped people, lending hands to poor people for food and so on.
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activities will result in the strong character development of a child from a young age and will benefit the country and community as a whole.
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,
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should not only focus on a child's level of education, but they should
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enforce socio-economic activities as part of their curriculum by creating different groups of
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including all ages. The education system should be adapted in a very dynamic way in a school. Just letting students understand the benefits of degrees and the amount of money they can earn, will not only ruin a
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's life but will
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hamper the soft culture in society.
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making
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's selfish and immature.
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,
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should develop a free environment that allows students to put their ideas forward for doing activities that benefits society.
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, doing a small act and creating money and
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donating it.
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freedom of thought will help
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to think about society at large and benefit it. To conclude,
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should focus on creating good citizens by adapting multiple positive
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and making
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a part of the education system as individual development will result positive if social
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in
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's are fed strongly.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • crucial
  • shaping
  • developing
  • unique talents
  • potential
  • well-rounded
  • academic
  • social
  • emotional development
  • personal growth
  • contribute positively
  • self-expression
  • creativity
  • individuality
  • happier and more fulfilled
  • strike a balance
  • preparing students for the workforce
  • nurturing
  • individual needs
  • pursue passions and interests
  • thrive
  • future professionals
  • community institutions
  • shape community values
  • foster civic engagement
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