Many people consider that increasing the age at which people can get driving licenses can improve road safety
Due to an increasing number of car accidents nowadays, it is believed that people should get driver licences when the age increases which can help the road more safely. I agree with
this
viewpoint and think that age needs to be considered for a driver to drive a car. The reasons to support my opinion will be outlined in detail.Submitted by panaratsri on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite