You have recently moved to a new flat. Unfortunately, you lost some money the other day, and cannot afford to pay next month's rent which is due. Write a letter to the landlord explaining the situation that you will pay as soon as your parents send the money Also, mention that there are some pridem with the flat.

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Dear Mr Raj, I am writing

this

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letter, in connection to the rent of a flat, which is due

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week.

Last

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week, I had misplaced my wallet and unfortunately, I had lost all my cash and debit cards in it.

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,I have lodged a request for issuing me a new card to the bank ,

however

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, they have told me that it will take a week to process my request. Till

then

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,I have asked my parents to transfer the money to my account, until

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I will not be able to pay my upcoming month rent on time and I assured you that I will clear my dues as soon as I received the money.

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, there are some flaws in the roof of the flat,as water is dripping from it in the kitchen, probably due to leakage in a pipe. you are requested to send a plumber to fix the fault as early as possible. I hope, you will understand my situation and allow me a grace period for a few days and help me in a tough financial position. Yours sincerely, John

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

184 words

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