IELTS Writing Correction Service /
Writing Samples /
Band 5.5

It is very clear that English should be the primary foreign language taught in all schools around the world. Learning a different language before English is, in today’s world, a waste of time. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

#english #language #schools #world #today’s #waste #time
As it has been observed in today's generation we have most of the population speaking in
English
Change the article
the English
show examples
language
 around the globe. I disagree with the above statement that
English
Change the article
the English
show examples
language
 should be the primary
language
 taught in all schools around the world. It is said that there is
one
 native
language
 we all have in our
country
. In
this
 essay, I will be explaining both views in the following paragraphs. On
one
 hand, it has been observed
English
Change the article
the English
show examples
language
 has been spoken by millions of people around the world. There are many news channels, sports commentary, and advertisements flashed in
English
Change the article
the English
show examples
language
.
One
 should always learn
English
 as their primary
language
 because
this
 can help in many ways.
For instance
, if a Spanish person is travelling to the United States of America and he is not aware of
English
Correct article usage
the English
show examples
language
 there are many barriers he/she can face
such
 as asking for a route to his hotel or buying anything from the local store.
Furthermore
, if we are heading for our
further
 studies in Canada, the USA, Australia or the United Kingdom we should be perfect in
English
Change the article
the English
show examples
language
 because in that
country
 have their
first
language
 is
English
.
Hence
, it is said that
English
 should be
one
 of the primary
language
Fix the agreement mistake
languages
show examples
 taught in every school.
On the other hand
, it has been said that learning
English
Change the article
the English
show examples
language
 is waste of time because we cannot use it in any form. There are many countries
such
 as Germany, Spain, Japan and China that does not use
English
 as their
first
language
. Because
this
Change the determiner
these
show examples
 countries communicate in their
language
 for any business purpose.
Moreover
, german, Spanish, Japanese and Chinese are not used in any other
country
 apart from their own
country
.
For example
, If we have any Chinese client and he has given business to any Indian person it will become very difficult for an Indian person to speak in Chinese.
Hence
, they do not keep
English
Change the article
the English
show examples
language
 as their
first
language
 because children can get confused between their native
language
 and
English
Correct article usage
the English
show examples
language
. In conclusion, I would suggest that
English
 should not be a primary
language
 taught across every school but they must take the initiative to teach basic
English
. So, that any child in future would not face any difficulties if he travels to any other
country
 which is been considered as
English
 their
first
language
.
Submitted by vishak2511 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: